Monday, June 12, 2006

a story with images




but you'll need to click on them to see them at full size. i liked both...

xx

11 comments:

pyewacket said...

the pictures are COOL, the writing is terrible!Its like reading a soft cover 1980's erotic 'novel'.A pretty non imaginative transformation id say...{shoot 'Ken' for starters!}
Go deeper!

Anonymous said...

non-imaginative...???!!!
sorry i know you're entitled to your opinion but dude i think you're high! it's much better than what i usually see dredged up by others. i think you should put your talent on the line so we can see just how well your creativity comes through. sorry if this upsets you im not trying to start a flame war but i have to disagree with your comment.

Anonymous said...

well i have to say that spelling and grammar are points to consider seeing as i've seen tons of stories out there that needed a good run through by a spell checker. i myself am no english major nor do i pretend to be some great pullitzer prize winner. the writer of this series of captions also had no such pretences. now as to the 'cliched' plot, maybe so but at the time it was something that came to her. she didn't spend hours agonizing over it as if she was some pompous artiste. it was just what came to her when she saw those pictures on the Abyss creations site. it is true that the trapped/forced transformation seems to be one of the most common threads running through this community but then the whole idea of transforming a woman into an object does have it's roots in bondage and humiliation. also true is the statement that plotlines do seem to get lost in a whirlwind of transformation and sexual titalation but i for one was never looking for or expecting a nobel prize winning novel. a clever tf or something new to breath life into these over used ideas was something i paid attention to. in addition i am always attracted to the transformation fantasies of any woman. now the author of this story did make a similar observation about how everything she'd read on the legacy or the manipulation junction,when that site was still available, seemed so hackneyed and repetitive. one plot idea that we both seemed to agree was for the most part ignored was the voluntary tf. again this was something she created off the cuff just something to make a friend of hers smile as well as show at least to this friend her sexy and creative mind. if it makes you smile and you get a kick out of it great! i will also say that while these plot ideas all seem cliched to our jaded sensibilities when i first started reading this material it was in no way a cliche to me then.

Anonymous said...

sorry about the huge block of text forgot to add paragraphs. told you im not a great writer!

Anonymous said...

Nice pix!

pyewacket said...

yeah maybe i was a bit rough..all creative writing is good. I re-read, relaxed my critic of a mind and kinda liked it too.

{I went an visited an avid doll collector today. Exqusit dolls! Made cloaths himself. Aquired dolls from around the world. Very detailed. Inspiring. I recomend finding and going to your local 'DOLL SHOW'. They would happen annually in most major citys.}

Asudem Latex said...

dosman - well she's lovely but i think her breast are way too large.. otherwise i'd not complain if i were her ;-)

as for people who bitch about lack of good stories - put up or shut up i say :P trying is better than sitting and bitching from the sidelines.

and the tortured writer is getting pretty old. maybe its just a cover for not being very good?

xx

Anonymous said...

brad no apologies are necessary. i was just trying to explain for the author who's a friend of mine.

i know how trying to come up with an original idea can be difficult. i myself have a long list of story ideas some might be good some might not but i try.

what i do hope is that if i write something and people don't enjoy it then perhaps it might inspire them to do one that's better. something like that did happen once that i know of. i wrote a story based on one someone else had written then someone after reading mine wrote his version that was so incredibly better!

hey asudem speaking as a dirty old man breasts can never be too large!!

Anonymous said...

Jsan - Hackneyed and repetitive...hmmm....nice commentary...gotta love that perspective...shaking head slowly...I know who you're talking about...

Anonymous said...

northern chill no offense it's just a comment that was made to me. i do enjoy your stories i try not to be to critical of anyone since i know how hard it is to get the guts to even put yourself in the spotlight like that!

Anonymous said...

None taken, Johnsan. As I've said privately before to MB, it's always easier for some to complain than to contribute positively to this niche. I've tried the latter for years and not just writing but encouraging others to do so, as you well know.