Monday, June 12, 2006

a story with images




but you'll need to click on them to see them at full size. i liked both...

xx

20 comments:

Dosman! said...

Are you jealous of her? I think you'd be perfect in her shoes..er, wig.

pyewacket said...

the pictures are COOL, the writing is terrible!Its like reading a soft cover 1980's erotic 'novel'.A pretty non imaginative transformation id say...{shoot 'Ken' for starters!}
Go deeper!

jsan said...

non-imaginative...???!!!
sorry i know you're entitled to your opinion but dude i think you're high! it's much better than what i usually see dredged up by others. i think you should put your talent on the line so we can see just how well your creativity comes through. sorry if this upsets you im not trying to start a flame war but i have to disagree with your comment.

Bradley said...

Ok...I am not here to critique the story, as it is. I'll just say it is average for the genre, I've read better and way worse too.

But the *doll*...Dear GOD! Yes, I've seen it before but not up close. Make Asudem jealous, hell, it almost makes ME jealous (not that I'd like totally being unable to move or *anything*, but you know, the look), it makes me want to do *that* to any willing or worthy women I find....

It isn't every day I find a RealDoll Pic that makes me blush, but the second one did just that...now if we could only get the Dolls moving, walking, talking like a little bit.

Gah. Must stop now. Starting to go *blonde* upstairs, like totally. :p

SteveMND said...

Hmm, I'll have to agree with Bradley here in that I've seen better and I've seen worse. To be fair, there's only so much you can do with about a page's worth of room. At least the grammar and spelling was generally pretty good (with the exception of the totally-mangled attempt to spell "nervous") :)

That said, the plot is about one of the most cliched here in the genre. Accident occurs, girl is stuck, only one person can relase her, and he dies in some convenient manner shortly thereafter (altho we see this in a lot of bondage-related stories as well).

As I was getting redy to type that, however, it dawned on me that there really are precious few plotlines in the 'doll' genre itself -- or at least ones we see. In addition to the "magical accident," they tend to boil down into "magic spell as revenge," "Crazy boss turns sexy employee into a doll," and maybe two or three more.

I wonder if that is a statement about the genre's writers/readers, or just the rather narrow focus of this fetish...

Jean said...

Ooh I like Totally liked this kind of stuff....

Bradley said...

"stevemnd" said, among other things:

"As I was getting redy to type that, however, it dawned on me that there really are precious few plotlines in the 'doll' genre itself -- or at least ones we see. In addition to the "magical accident," they tend to boil down into "magic spell as revenge," "Crazy boss turns sexy employee into a doll," and maybe two or three more.

I wonder if that is a statement about the genre's writers/readers, or just the rather narrow focus of this fetish... "

Personally, I think it is a little bit of both. On the one hand, there are a lot of folks who read and write doll fiction as an erotic adjunct--as just another form of pr0n, basically. I think that is just the desire to write the kind of sexy story people think folks want to read, but calculation aside, there is also likely some desire to "normalize" the desire in there at work too (in that the story is an attempt to prove dolls are sexy, or that at least the author isn't a loon).

This first one shows up the worst in stories that essentially read like "mad-libs" in that the author just sort of sticks to an itinerary, hitting points A through F of the genre, giving folks the obligatory "experience" without providing too much "story" to distract from that "rED H0t sEXX0rs" bit. You know, writing like it's a kung fu flick, trying not to disturb the action by giving readers too much to fast-forward through. :P

Some of it *is* the limits of erotic fiction though. There are only so many emotions to write out, and so many combinations of transformation, physical and mental, that can be used to convey sexuality as opposed to horror or ultra-violence, for example. Like chords in music, there are only so many combinations, and within those combinations, some sound like music to human ears while others sound like noise.

Combine that with a quick burn-out rate for those who at least *try* to tell a story first, writing a narrative that just so happens to have living dolls in it (which is more mainstream but never quite enough for the fetish crowd), and you have a situation where, sadly, stagnation is more the rule than the exception.

I've been trying to deal with this in my writer's block (plus the usual burn-out/motivation issues mind you) for years now, and I am not sure the problem can be fixed per se, in a "solve for X" manner, not without resorting to rote, "mad-libbed" itineraries.

Which after a while read like so much cut and paste, no offense meant. ;)

jsan said...

well i have to say that spelling and grammar are points to consider seeing as i've seen tons of stories out there that needed a good run through by a spell checker. i myself am no english major nor do i pretend to be some great pullitzer prize winner. the writer of this series of captions also had no such pretences. now as to the 'cliched' plot, maybe so but at the time it was something that came to her. she didn't spend hours agonizing over it as if she was some pompous artiste. it was just what came to her when she saw those pictures on the Abyss creations site. it is true that the trapped/forced transformation seems to be one of the most common threads running through this community but then the whole idea of transforming a woman into an object does have it's roots in bondage and humiliation. also true is the statement that plotlines do seem to get lost in a whirlwind of transformation and sexual titalation but i for one was never looking for or expecting a nobel prize winning novel. a clever tf or something new to breath life into these over used ideas was something i paid attention to. in addition i am always attracted to the transformation fantasies of any woman. now the author of this story did make a similar observation about how everything she'd read on the legacy or the manipulation junction,when that site was still available, seemed so hackneyed and repetitive. one plot idea that we both seemed to agree was for the most part ignored was the voluntary tf. again this was something she created off the cuff just something to make a friend of hers smile as well as show at least to this friend her sexy and creative mind. if it makes you smile and you get a kick out of it great! i will also say that while these plot ideas all seem cliched to our jaded sensibilities when i first started reading this material it was in no way a cliche to me then.

jsan said...

sorry about the huge block of text forgot to add paragraphs. told you im not a great writer!

Bradley said...

"Jsan", it's okay, I'm not a great writer either, if I were I would get more done. **blushes** And I humbly apologize if I came off sounding pretentious, such was not my intent.

All I was really trying to say (and yeah, I type too much, get verbose, etc.) is that the easy doll stories are done pretty much, and now writing the new stuff is harder, at least for those who follow such things.

Which is one of the reasons I am more likely to follow other kinds of erotic fiction that *relate* to doll fiction rather than doll fiction directly....because it is new *to me* and more likely to win me over by being fresh.

Sorry for any and all confusion. :)

WinterRose said...

Hmm.. I seem to recognize that set of pics... particularly the last one. ^_^ That said... The Anna Mae model of Realdoll certainly caught the eye of us folks over at the Hypnopics collective.

-WinterRose

northern chill said...

Nice pix!

pyewacket said...

yeah maybe i was a bit rough..all creative writing is good. I re-read, relaxed my critic of a mind and kinda liked it too.

{I went an visited an avid doll collector today. Exqusit dolls! Made cloaths himself. Aquired dolls from around the world. Very detailed. Inspiring. I recomend finding and going to your local 'DOLL SHOW'. They would happen annually in most major citys.}

Asudem Latex said...

dosman - well she's lovely but i think her breast are way too large.. otherwise i'd not complain if i were her ;-)

as for people who bitch about lack of good stories - put up or shut up i say :P trying is better than sitting and bitching from the sidelines.

and the tortured writer is getting pretty old. maybe its just a cover for not being very good?

xx

jsan said...

brad no apologies are necessary. i was just trying to explain for the author who's a friend of mine.

i know how trying to come up with an original idea can be difficult. i myself have a long list of story ideas some might be good some might not but i try.

what i do hope is that if i write something and people don't enjoy it then perhaps it might inspire them to do one that's better. something like that did happen once that i know of. i wrote a story based on one someone else had written then someone after reading mine wrote his version that was so incredibly better!

hey asudem speaking as a dirty old man breasts can never be too large!!

northern chill said...

Jsan - Hackneyed and repetitive...hmmm....nice commentary...gotta love that perspective...shaking head slowly...I know who you're talking about...

Anonymous said...

northern chill no offense it's just a comment that was made to me. i do enjoy your stories i try not to be to critical of anyone since i know how hard it is to get the guts to even put yourself in the spotlight like that!

northern chill said...

None taken, Johnsan. As I've said privately before to MB, it's always easier for some to complain than to contribute positively to this niche. I've tried the latter for years and not just writing but encouraging others to do so, as you well know.

Manne said...

I totally agree with you Asudem. Her breasts are too large. It takes away from her dolliness. I am a fan of nice upright erect breasts. Not too large and not too small. More in proportion to the body. You definately have the right mindset to be that perfect doll Asudem. Yours MANNE

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